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Thursday, March 18, 2021

A Sense of Doubt blog post #2221 - 10 Ways to spot bad writing



A Sense of Doubt blog post #2221 - 10 Ways to spot bad writing



Seems an apt post right now for GRADING HELL.

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https://medium.com/the-partnered-pen/10-ways-to-avoid-bad-writing-according-to-a-new-york-literary-agent-b6e16f3c830f

10 Ways to Avoid Bad Writing According To a New York Literary Agent

Good writing is subjective. Bad writing is obvious. 

Jan 17 · 11 min read

Good writing is subjective…

What trips up writers…

You only need to read 5 pages to spot bad writing…

It’s not about “rules” for good writing.

10 Ways to Avoid Bad Writing

1. Show, don’t tell.

Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. — Anton Chekhov
Writing is seeing. It is paying attention. — Kate DiCamillo

2. Also? Your first draft isn’t writing…

The first draft is just you telling yourself the story. — Terry Pratchett
I’m writing a first draft and reminding myself that I’m simply shoveling sand into a box so later I can build castles. — Shannon Hale

3. Chop liberally to maintain focus…

When a reader puts a story aside because it ‘got boring,’ the boredom arose because the writer grew enchanted with his powers of description and lost sight of his priority, which is to keep the ball rolling. — Stephen King
Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it — wholeheartedly — and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings. — Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch

4. Avoid lazy adjectives & adverbs…

Adverbs are the tool of the lazy writer. — Mark Twain
I believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs and I will shout it from the rooftops. — Stephen King

5. Clichés weaken your writing…

All writing is a campaign against cliché. Not just clichés of the pen, but clichés of the mind and clichés of the heart.
— Martin Amis

6. Pay attention to pace…

The key to good writing is to leave Boo Radley in the house until the end of the story — Michael P. Naughton
There are books of which the backs and covers are by far the best parts. — Charles Dickens

7. Read

If you don’t have the time to read, you don’t have the time or tools to write. Simple as that. — Stephen King
Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. — Joseph Addison

8. Play with poetry

Poetry is the rhythmical creation of beauty in words — Edgar Allan Poe
Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. — Thomas Gray

9. Seek helpful feedback…

When people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. — Neil Gaiman

10. Expect rejection

The world breaks everyone, and afterward, some are strong at the broken places. — Ernest Hemingway

Before You Go…





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